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Whoa. Pretty darn good if you ask me. Did you start from stratch and cg it? If so, wow (you probably did though lol). The foot looks kinda funny shape (on the bottom near the deviantart link) as well as the hands, well you said that already. =_=

I like the style a lot though. Good job. ^_^

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Interesting wall. However, there are a few things about it that make it look a little wierd to me. The extraction on the hair is a little, well, sharp. The white tree on the very left (a big one) is kinda rough in texture; I don't know if you did that on purpose but I personally prefer it smooth. =P

The last part is the giant white spot in the bottom right-hand corner. Stands out a little too much for my tastes but it's all good.

I like the mist and the snowflakes. Matches very well.

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Very nice drawing. At a distance, her left eye doesn't look wierd but when I blew it up in size, her left eye (from my perspective) looks like it's glancing to the size rather than forward as her other eye does. However, that's very minor.

I love the way you drew feathers. It looks absolutely stunning.

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If I'm not mistaken, the policy for Doujinshi is YOUR OWN WORK. This obviously is a drawing of CLAMP since it's the cover of a Tsubasa Resevoir Chronicle manga.

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Mel mel mel (silentmasamune). You are too right. >_>

Quote by miscmanThis wallpaper is great. Look at all the details on it. And her clothes match so well with the background. Good work again. ;)


Sometimes, I feel like I should be stabbed in the back. People commenting these days, OPEN YOUR flipping eyes.

Ok. The examination begins.

Sky is strangely colored; clouds do NOT look clear and puffy (as many people have already said). The sky has some border with the sea. Blending needs work. WAY too many sparkles. As far as I'm concerned, the sparkles actually aren't necessary and add too much extra articles to the wall. The island sticks out far too much for my tastes. The beach doesn't look like it hasn't been edited; it's also kinda blurry. Lighting is weird and the extraction and blending need work.

Some things you can't slap on all together. A wall isn't like 1-2-3. Oh well, nice effort I suppose.


I also might add that I'm not a good waller myself. I'm sure there are others who could examine this better than myself.

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Lol. How simple, yet it all matches quite well. I can already see patches of sand and sea repeating itself. ;) That's on thing you can hide from us...or maybe me. I love the sky, and did you make that tip of the wing yourself!? Wow... @_@

Not bad but sometimes the clone stamp (or watever you are using) can make the sand and sea a little repetative.

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@_@

Very nice drawing...

One thing I noticed you might change is possibly the way you do the hair. I dunno, it seems a little strange to me.

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Wow. Nice composition.

The text is kinda big though...it's not like you want ppl to rip it anyways. ;)
I think the sky is a bit funky at the top portions where thae black and blue clash
with each other. It doesn't...blend well in my opinion. Everything else is pretty
darn good. Extraction must have been hell. @_@

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Hmmmmm....

Interesting. I think Sakura (is that Sakura? I only recognize the wand) is too dark. the outlining around her I mean. It stands out a little too much for my tastes. BG is very nice. You put in a whole bunch of random skills and put it into one wallpaper, plus everything is blened together pretty well.

ps: Are those wings made with the pen tool? @_@

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Oh wow! @_@

Nice drawing! The chin might need a little changing but very nice! @_@

ps: Teach me to draw. XD jk

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Sexified?! @_@ XD

Anyways, nice to see you still aren't too rusty Biri. ^^ The text "Incadesence" is kinda weird looking in the top right corner though. Somehow, the colors don't appeal to me that much. Other tan that, pretty darn good. :)

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LOL. Walling whore. What an interesting phrase. XD

Interesting wallie. @_@ The Bear is...green...and...radioactive. You know if you studied physics that if something is really radioactive and is living, it wouldn't be the same animal before. ^_^; Funny text as well. XD

Anyways real comment:

The abstract/grundgy thingy in the top right hand corner is cool. What I don't get are those plus signs in the top left hand corner. The random putting in of all stuff is kinda of strange. A bear on a grundgy bg with plus signs and green blobs. I really don't know what to say.

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EDIT: Nice scan I might wall this if Cloudy didn't screw me overrr. XD

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I must say....

The thumbnail actually looks a little better. I think the vector stands out a little too much for my tastes. It's less apparent in the thumb. Nice job on the vectoring and shadowing though.

Ummm...why are there buildings?

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The Da Vinci Code! XD

Nice anagram.

This has got to be one of my fav books. Anywayz it seems sort of grudgish. Quite interesting. I think the text stands out too much though.

Nice wall btw.

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Wow. This is actually very good (compared to those I seen posted recently).

There's quite a bit of detail. Maybe it is a little on the small side?

Love the feathers and shadowing. You'll get a rare fav for your efforts. :)

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Ooooooo...

Shiny! XD

i must say this is quite strange. There are some...pen markings on the top right corner area? Otherwise lines. That's sorta strange. Wait, there's lines everywhere. @_@

Anyways, the circle thingy is...I don't know what to say. It feels like it's strange to me. I don't know what you can do but yeah.

Love the light bursts and color. The grain or dust stuff stands out too much for my tastes. Maybe blur? I dunno, I'm not a master of wallpaper making.

Nice wall, especially for a person that doesn't wall often. ^_^

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Nice Card Captor Sakura drawing. :)
Oh yeah. For future reference, drawings you make go in the "Doujinshi" section. Thank you for your cooperation.

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Wow. An actually decent looking wall from the other mass of a bunch of crap. It's sad how MT quality has really gone down, but that makes these wall look "Sammo" 1337. XD

Some things I might point out are the moon. The moon kinda looks blury. Did you take the picture from NASA or something? XD Anyways, it doesn't really match THAT well. The other part is the water. The waves and water ripples are...strange.

Nice wall even though I critized. I would never be able to wall THIS good.

AP testing. Yes...the hell. My brother's taking 5 AP tests.

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I actually like the colorfulness of the wallpaper. What's kinda strange is the girl kinda stands out too much. You've done a great job to blend her but I guess blending could use a little bit more. Nice light bursts.

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Stupid douple post. Sorry

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4chan? @_@ *runz away* XD
Nice scan. I might use it to wall from.

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Thank you Kitten! It doesn't have to be that sudden but thank you very much. Very nice job on composition. Very cool forest look. :) For some odd reason, the girl looks vectored but that makes it even cooler. Thank you.

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Hey! It's a wall of me! XD
(or my avatar/sig) XD

The bg looks kinda funky but the clouds look uber 1337. The planets are kinda funky and there's that dust spiral thing in the middle. I think it would look better without that thing. I can't believe you actually extracted the girl from the scan. Must have been a pain. @_@ Nice job.

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